In shuffling steps, without pause, without rest
Such sounds I heard outside my _ door
A stop, a scream, a faint light gleam
Prised out from under the gaps in my floor
I watched and I waited with breath most bated
For that which created my future in store
The creak, a shriek, my knees turned weak
Trembling, I stood and opened the door.
But to my surprise, in hindsight, a guise,
For boats were docking upon night’s cold shore
I turned around to have a lie down,
When the fateful knocking began once more
“Begone and forget it! My thoughts must have beset it!
I am not falling for such childish tricks anymore!”
The knocking turned quiet, was all at once silent
I spake at the silence, “Who art thou? Wherefore?”
But nothing was said, thoughts raced in my head
Like trying to rope in the tide from the shore.
My heart almost bleeding, I asked again pleading,
“Where art thou, who art thou? Please tell me, I implore!”
But silence remains and my windows still stained
From that night whence he came
A-knocking on my door.
thevanderbiltreview • Oct 31, 2024 at 12:00 pm The Vanderbilt Review Pick
Notes from Jiarui, our poetry editor: “The poem is a delight in its ability to create tension that clings to you after you’ve read it. The first thought I had when reading this was how aware I am of my beating heart. Thump, thump, thump it goes as the poem drags you into the spiral of anticipation. I felt like a child once again, hiding underneath my bedsheets as the monster prowls about. Death takes on the wonderful role of monster, amplifying the nerve of the narrator without a single glimpse. Always out of reach, presence always felt.”
thevanderbiltreview • Oct 31, 2024 at 12:00 pm The Vanderbilt Review Pick
Notes from Mariana, the poem’s author: “Edgar Allan Poe has always been a huge inspiration in my writing, and this piece was definitely inspired by the rhythms and tone used in his poem “The Raven.” I like the inevitability of the raven itself in that poem, and I feel like it translates nicely to my own; we have no control when death decides to come knocking, or if we will actually be taken by death versus just being scared by the possibility of its presence.”